Saturday, August 11, 2007

சுமைத்தாங்கி


நான் சுமக்த துணிந்தது
என் இழப்பு ஒன்றைத்தான்

ஐயோ!
இருக்கும் இடமெல்லாமும்
அது எடுத்துக்கொண்டதே!



7 comments:

  1. your stuff never ceases to amaze me! Simple and beautiful! Have you thought about spoken word anytime? I badly want to do spoken word with your stuff! If you ever decide to do spoken word, I want to be a part of it! :)

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  2. do you use gmail often? my id is prasanna.phys

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  3. @ PV: :) Ty! :) What is spoken word?? kettadhu illa, u could tell me. n well added on gtalk :)

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  4. couldn't resist writing these lines...

    'naan aasai patadhu vellai niram ondrai thaan.
    aiyaho!
    enn thalai ellam
    epothu vellai aanthatey!'
    with that my long cherished wish of writing a verse comes true...lol

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  5. just to add some background info...
    lines inspired by the snow white syndrome a.k.a 'greying'

    and simple lines...very reflective though!

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  6. Nive,
    this is good but i beleive u hav the ability to go further beyond these words/thoughts and get some scintillating one :)

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  7. @ Murali:
    Lol! got that one myself :)

    @ Sathia:
    Ty! :) I hope to..

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